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Chapter 7 - page 3

posted 14th Oct 2018, 8:00 AM

Chapter 7 - page 3
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CiciEnixa

14th Oct 2018, 8:00 AM

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This isn't right. Everything looks great... it's not supposed to be.

Every day was hell. Every day was torture.

And you never protected me. You never even knew my name.

Because you were safe in a dream while I lived a nightmare.

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I'm gonna be gone for a business trip next week, and won't be back til November. There's still gonna be Page 4 next week on the 21st, but giving you guys a heads up as early as now. After that, hopefully I can get Page 5 up by November 11.

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gamer6574

14th Oct 2018, 8:12 AM

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This looks a lot better. Sorry for being cynical but we all know it was gonna get shitty real soon. I'm just amazed that Danni is even trying to be nice to him at this point. I mean unless Uncle Terrance "The douchebag" is more of Dusts psychological state than Danni influence. Which would be dark as bloody hell and I mean darker than a black steer's tuchus on a moonless prairie night. There was no bottom.

CiciEnixa

15th Oct 2018, 8:17 AM

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I pretty much expect you guys to be suspicious over everything, so no worries XD

I think I can say now that yes, Uncle Terrence is not Danni's doing. Danni's presence definitely aggravated what Uncle Terrence represents in Dust's mind, though. As for what that is, especially with how dark you described it...

gamer6574

15th Oct 2018, 8:28 AM

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You know how bad someone childhood is when a demon whose favorite hobby is to take your happiest memory and make it torture you is literally the one comforting him before him own mind attacks him. I mean this is like Danni pulling out a seemingly small block and a rube goldberg style shenanigans is comes tumbling down around him. Personally I'd love to see Danni get wrecked by Dusts projection of his Uncle. Then go well shit if I knew he had this much self loathing and was this nihilistic I'd just leave his poor ass alone, because he is already in hell.

Slim Kittens

14th Oct 2018, 9:27 AM

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Well, that went to Hell REAL fast.

CiciEnixa

15th Oct 2018, 8:25 AM

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Welcome to FD2R, Slim. One second going through a gradual horror cruise, the next going 0 to 60 XDDD

MST3KFan

14th Oct 2018, 10:09 AM

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And the cracks are starting to form as we see on Dust's 'Mom'.

The false dream world giving way to the dark real one Dust apparently endured.

Danni is working overtime on the torturing of people it seems.

CiciEnixa

15th Oct 2018, 8:52 AM

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I've only mentioned it on the side, but when people see through Danni's disguise, Danni can't hold it anymore and does indeed start literally cracking. It happens with Gus, too, except he finds out a little too late.

In the case of this illusion, though, torture was not the intended result...

Proxy170

14th Oct 2018, 4:22 PM

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Hm so...I'm thinking this is maybe more of a Mina influenced vision than purely demon, because when the demon created Gus' nightmare, they knew all the details even though Gus never told them any of that. But with Dust here, there's inconsistencies and incomplete pieces.

UNLESS the demon is still reading Dust's mind, and in fact it's Dust's mind that's all muddled and warped and therefore the demon can't create a proper illusion.

CiciEnixa

15th Oct 2018, 9:14 AM

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While it's mostly the second part, there is a portion of the first that's actually true:

Dantalion cannot say a name that someone else doesn't tell them. Even if sifting through that person's memories should let them know the name, they can't actually use it. For Gus's case, he pretty much volunteered the information during the nightmare.

But all Dust has ever told Mina (and by extension, Danni) is his name was Dust. He never mentioned a first name, and so Danni couldn't say it and the disguise started to crack. Not that Danni knowing the answer would've helped, since we know the Mom would have no idea what Dust's name is anyway.

For the second part, there is something in Dust's mind keeping Danni from getting the memories needed. Hopefully next page can give you guys a clearer hint for what that is, but if not, Danni does eventually say it outright.

mjkj

14th Oct 2018, 7:20 PM

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So, the nightmare comes through...

CiciEnixa

15th Oct 2018, 9:19 AM

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And it's far worse than anything Dantalion could've expected...

mjkj

19th Oct 2018, 3:35 PM

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So, Dantalion is confimed? ;-)

sigpig

15th Oct 2018, 12:53 AM

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Methinks that Danni is getting back at Dust for calling her(?) out. If Dust had simply gone along with the "nice" dream, all would have been well. However, it seems that Dust can't help himself by constantly stepping on his d***...

CiciEnixa

15th Oct 2018, 9:24 AM

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(I stick to "they" only because of Danni's shapeshifting, but "she" and "her" is perfectly fine, too!)

It *would* be a real nasty revenge plot if that were the case, Dust ruining everything. But for this time, there was good intent, but a part of Dust's own nightmares was not accounted for and managed to seep into the cracks...

DLKmusic

15th Oct 2018, 12:54 AM

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All I can say is.... ooooffff!

Well, at least now I'm pretty sure it's Dantalion, and not Clio....

CiciEnixa

15th Oct 2018, 9:36 AM

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Danni should've scouted out Dust's head a little more. Maybe then they would've realized that Dust cannot be out-nightmared.

Jarvi

15th Oct 2018, 3:02 PM

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So Dust went from one father figure that was hurting him to another that was chopping kids? Geez.. maybe demons really should be Thanosing out part of humanity xD It would be good though if they were doing it with the actual bad part of humanity xD They get points for Gus but those murdered kids are kind of destroying the image...
Though on the other side, maybe demons can see into the future, and Gavyn would turn into a mass murderer type ^^'

CiciEnixa

16th Oct 2018, 1:18 PM

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Dust did not win the Dad Lottery, unfortunately. And uh... I should probably mention also that Dust actually took the Dad Lottery 3 times (there was a father figure between the time of Uncle Terrence and Cadoc, yet to be mentioned). I promise that if he ever takes the Dad Lottery a fourth time, I'll give him a better dad.

It WOULD be good if the Demons were getting rid of the bad people... but they could just be out to get rid of the innocents. They ARE Demons, elfy dad XD

Centcomm

16th Oct 2018, 9:16 AM

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oh dear god.. Cici .. stop..this is scary!

CiciEnixa

16th Oct 2018, 1:24 PM

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But... But this is is my life blood, Centy :,D

Ruxin

17th Oct 2018, 7:52 PM

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So question, if I read this at work would that be a smart idea or would I need to worry about content. Cause I really need to catch up on this.

CiciEnixa

18th Oct 2018, 8:51 AM

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Ruxin~ If you're being monitored, you probably should not try reading webcomics at work at all XD There unfortunately are some nsfw content scattered here and there, mainly in Ch3 and Ch6. They all fall under violence and gore, but beyond that, I am very child-friendly (<--lies) XDDD

Ruxin

18th Oct 2018, 11:10 AM

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Eh, I'm monitored but they allow us to fuck around on the net between work so it's no big deal to read a comic. Nudity would be the main concern, if there's none of that then I'm probably AOK.

CiciEnixa

18th Oct 2018, 11:55 AM

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Oh, yeah, then definitely, it should be good! The closest thing to nudity is 1 panel of a guy's bare shoulders XD

Ruxin

18th Oct 2018, 8:42 PM

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That offends my puritan sensibilities.

DLKmusic

20th Oct 2018, 8:56 AM

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Bare Shoulders and a suggestion of Man-Butt, Many of us were traumatized for life... :-(

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