Chapter 1 - page 9

posted 10th Aug 2014, 11:47 AM

Chapter 1 - page 9

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10th Aug 2014, 11:47 AM

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"Ya ain't getting anywhere. Not out of this prison, not out of life."

You guys remember that line? I remember that line. I wrote that (horrible) line.

I'm glad I made this a webcomic. For those who are interested to know, I don't normally write in script format. I write all my stories as description-heavy novel-length prose. This is no exception. This one page right here? It's equivalent to about three full pages of words. THREE. FULL. PAGES. Good thing people invented comics.

Anti-Walls-Of-Text Anonymous, anyone?

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10th Aug 2014, 2:05 PM

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Pssh, my comic has pages with way more text. Writing in that style is how a few comic authors do it, iirc. I know I've seen scripts before that are written out in that way. If you ever do make the switch to scripts, there's a program called Celtx that has a built-in template for comics.

Great page, things are getting pretty bleak!


10th Aug 2014, 8:43 PM

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Celtx looks pretty interesting. I might give it a try for the next chapter. Thanks!


10th Aug 2014, 8:34 PM

view Skweeee's profile

I really like the impact of panels four and five. Great story telling.


10th Aug 2014, 9:10 PM

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Glad you like the story so far. A little fun fact: panels four to seven looked completely different in my initial sketch (scenes were vague splatters, everything was in silhouette, which might not have given the same impact).


9th Sep 2014, 9:29 PM

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Awww he's so sweet protecting his little fellow ^^ ♥


11th Dec 2014, 10:55 PM

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Hmmmm... I'm intrigued why one inept thief would be so threatening to let loose.
And oh my, you did apparently mean literal chopping. :D (I shouldn't be smiling)

Matt Knab

13th Feb 2015, 4:24 PM

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A plot is afoot!


15th Feb 2015, 8:35 AM

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Plot? What plot? There is no plot what are you talking about sir ha ha ha ha... >__> (just kidding)

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