Chapter 1 - page 9

posted 10th Aug 2014, 11:47 AM

Chapter 1 - page 9
Scream for Help
I am beauty, I am grace

CiciEnixa

10th Aug 2014, 11:47 AM

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"Ya ain't getting anywhere. Not out of this prison, not out of life."

You guys remember that line? I remember that line. I wrote that (horrible) line.

I'm glad I made this a webcomic. For those who are interested to know, I don't normally write in script format. I write all my stories as description-heavy novel-length prose. This is no exception. This one page right here? It's equivalent to about three full pages of words. THREE. FULL. PAGES. Good thing people invented comics.

Anti-Walls-Of-Text Anonymous, anyone?

I will come and eat your face

Ruxin

10th Aug 2014, 2:05 PM

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Pssh, my comic has pages with way more text. Writing in that style is how a few comic authors do it, iirc. I know I've seen scripts before that are written out in that way. If you ever do make the switch to scripts, there's a program called Celtx that has a built-in template for comics.

Great page, things are getting pretty bleak!

CiciEnixa

10th Aug 2014, 8:43 PM

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Celtx looks pretty interesting. I might give it a try for the next chapter. Thanks!

Skweeee

10th Aug 2014, 8:34 PM

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I really like the impact of panels four and five. Great story telling.

CiciEnixa

10th Aug 2014, 9:10 PM

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Glad you like the story so far. A little fun fact: panels four to seven looked completely different in my initial sketch (scenes were vague splatters, everything was in silhouette, which might not have given the same impact).

Jarvi

9th Sep 2014, 9:29 PM

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Awww he's so sweet protecting his little fellow ^^ ♥

Damatris

11th Dec 2014, 10:55 PM

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Hmmmm... I'm intrigued why one inept thief would be so threatening to let loose.
And oh my, you did apparently mean literal chopping. :D (I shouldn't be smiling)

Matt Knab

13th Feb 2015, 4:24 PM

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Oro?
A plot is afoot!

CiciEnixa

15th Feb 2015, 8:35 AM

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Plot? What plot? There is no plot what are you talking about sir ha ha ha ha... >__> (just kidding)

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