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Chapter 6 - page 5

posted 18th Jun 2017, 8:00 AM

Chapter 6 - page 5

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CiciEnixa

18th Jun 2017, 8:00 AM

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Because both my seesters have so little faith that any of you would find it believable XD:

Yes, William "Billy" Guerra and Jesse Lagrippe are siblings. No, they are not related by blood, nor have the same surname. Billy's mom married Jesse's dad. They kept their respective biological mom's surnames but love each other as much as any pair of siblings would.

And for those that wanted to see the artwork of the cards... I only have those two right now, I'm sowwy XD I didn't think you guys would want to see the artwork at all! I could always draw the other two faced cards if you guys really wanted but the two here are all I've drawn so far.

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Speaking of drawing, there is a slight chance that next page might not go up on time because I'll be taking a few days to rest my wrist and I have not had much time to do any actual paging. Just letting you guys know in advance!

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MST3KFan

18th Jun 2017, 8:13 AM

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Huh... Mina turns out to be a good card player it seems...well, one with goof luck anyway. XD

And love the sisterly love here...first Jessie seems concerned for her bro, and then sees what they were playing cards and then is all "Oh, that explains it." XD

CiciEnixa

18th Jun 2017, 4:08 PM

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Hahaha, yes, it does seem that way :D

It's not the first time Jesse has found her bro so dismayed over losing a card game, so she's no longer as surprised as she would be.

Proxy170

18th Jun 2017, 3:39 PM

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haha did Billy just get his ass handed to him by a little princess? XD

Loving the character designs in this gang :D

I think there may be a typo here, when Jesse says "by the by"? Did you mean "by the way?"

CiciEnixa

18th Jun 2017, 4:16 PM

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He diiiid XDDD Thank you, I've been doing and redoing their designs as early as Chapter 4, it's taken a while for me to get them right.

Ish not a typo, don't worry. "By the by" is an old way of saying "by the way", sometime round the 18th to 19th century.

(Cici may not always type correctly in chat, but Cici always tries to be careful with FD2R typos because one wrong spelling can mean redoing a whole page. Once I've started lines, it's very difficult to edit text. *Paging Process with Cici*~)

Proxy170

18th Jun 2017, 4:19 PM

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OOoh TIL! :D

I usually point out what might be a typo in a comic because I know I would want to know, but *zip* I'll shut up if you don't want that XD

CiciEnixa

18th Jun 2017, 9:46 PM

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Oh no no, I don't mean that at all! Of course I'd appreciate any typos or art errors pointed out, it helps muchly! And I do admit the way the phrase is could have it seem like a typo, so sowwy for the confusion and thank you, Proxy <3

mjkj

18th Jun 2017, 8:08 PM

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Oh, does that yes mean: yes, she did break him? =P ;)

CiciEnixa

19th Jun 2017, 8:26 AM

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Honestly given his reaction, it's probably a yes to both XDDD

mjkj

22nd Jun 2017, 1:46 PM

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*lol*

Jarvi

18th Jun 2017, 9:14 PM

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Omg poor Billy xD Don't cry, baby, it will be alright xD You can play with me, I'm awful at games xDD

CiciEnixa

19th Jun 2017, 8:28 AM

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Something tells me he'll still lose horribly and he'll just be a rolling weepy ball of sadness XD

Haegan2005

19th Jun 2017, 10:15 AM

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Beginners luck stresses many a teacher! lol!

CiciEnixa

19th Jun 2017, 12:52 PM

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I know that feeling XDDD

DLKmusic

19th Jun 2017, 12:09 PM

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She broke him...

I have nothing meaningful to add to that...

CiciEnixa

19th Jun 2017, 12:54 PM

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*conducts tape funeral for Billy, broken by the very action of a merciless princess putting down a pair of cards*

Rest in Pieces...XD

HeSerpenty

20th Jun 2017, 12:28 AM

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hahahaha awww poor Billy (he's adorable) <333

Mina we have found something you are good at! And yay for new character! She looks awesome

CiciEnixa

23rd Jun 2017, 7:40 AM

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I'm so happy you think he issss (my sis finds him adorable, too, and has claimed him to be her fave character lol)

Mina *could* just be lucky? It's one round so far XD And yay, glad you also like Jesse <3<3<3

rufiangel

24th Jun 2017, 7:30 PM

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I think Mina might also just be naturally gifted at card games, but we'll see XD; poor Billy though, you broke him! ;v;*

Jesse's got a really neat outfit and she just looks super cool, I like her already X3 though... I would also imagine that it's Jesse who is more inclined to be okay with the shady business going on with the supplies than Billy is. He strikes me as the type to just go along with it if she wants to do so, even if he has misgivings. (Though that's not to say they may not have argued about it, it's just that I kind of see Billy giving in at the end.) The siblings look kinda different, are they not blood related? Or... are they not human aaaargh XD;;; [EDIT: Just read the A/N, okay that explains it XD]

I forgot to mention it in the last page, but whatever locket was around his neck, I'm going to guess we'll see what was in it ON HIS DEATHBED. Calling it now. :'D Anywho, love the card designs <333 that's awesome Cici! X3

[EDIT2: I read your A/Ns on the cards, and I feel a bit like Mina's representative card might be the Muse, while Dust's is the Fool. The functions seem somewhat reflective of their roles, figuratively speaking... I could be totally off-course, but hey, when you have a tinfoil hat the size of mine... XD]

Btw, make sure your wrist is well and rested, dear. <3

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