Chapter 5 - page 21

posted 23rd Apr 2017, 8:00 AM

Chapter 5 - page 21

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23rd Apr 2017, 8:00 AM

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Dust has no solid proof that he's gonna find what he's looking for in the great beyond, since he doesn't even know if what he's looking for survived Evendown. But, between going back to Evendown and trying the great beyond, who knows? Plus, Cadoc was a man with contingency plans. He wasn't expecting the destruction of the world, but he at least told his children if anything happened to him, he had friends who'd take them in.

Also, Convenience Cat, making Dust stay just long enough for him to see Mina and her new escort.

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23rd Apr 2017, 8:11 AM

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jealousy? Or does Dust know this guy and will he realize that Mina is in trouble? Hmmmm.


24th Apr 2017, 7:30 AM

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My very very first draft (as in just me tossing out ideas at first) actually does have Dust recognize Gus. And while Dust recognizing this guy would help show a certain "talent" Dust has, I felt it would confirm too much too soon XP

So, in this final version, no, Dust doesn't recognize the guy. Doesn't mean he doesn't find the guy suspicious, though ;P


23rd Apr 2017, 8:29 AM

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Ladies and Gentlemen, MUST shipping Inc. Is back in Business! We just got an order to ship this bunch of "Green Eyed Monsters"!!!



24th Apr 2017, 7:51 AM

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Oh boy XDDD That shipment better have "Flowers of Forgiveness" included in the package lol


24th Apr 2017, 10:17 AM

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Lessee.... Flowers of forgiveness.... flowers of forgiveness....

Nope, not on the invoice... but there is some perfume here.... "Ode d'possessiveness". does that count?

Fabian W.

23rd Apr 2017, 8:55 AM

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It seems that all places in Starwall are named after actual stars?? Awesome! :-D


24th Apr 2017, 8:05 AM

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Yay :D I'm glad someone noticed that, thank you Fabian :D

There are naming themes to almost every country. To name a few, Starwall has stars (Deneb and Vega), Khovard has metals and rocks (Pyroxene), and Prismadel has gems pertaining to colors (Amethyst Grove).


23rd Apr 2017, 10:54 AM

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Honestly she has the survival instincts as Hannibal Lectors dinner guests.


23rd Apr 2017, 12:04 PM

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Dang, now I'm actually curious... How would Minas Demons react to Hannibal Lector? He is, after all, a Kindred spirit!

Now I'm imagining the conversation, as Mina sits there in horror as the demons and Monseur Lector discuss such pleasant topics as live dismemberment, and wondering when it will turn south... er,,, south-er...

I think I was right, Cici! I guess I really AM a special kind of sick!


24th Apr 2017, 8:13 AM

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XD That would make two of us, then, Don XP

Though, Hannibal strikes me as being an okay guy as long as you're polite, and Demons are often... polite... I guess XD


24th Apr 2017, 12:01 PM

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..."Hannibal is an ok guy if you're polite"...

I['m still trying to wrap my brain around that statement, and it JUST DOESN"T REACH!!!!!


24th Apr 2017, 8:11 AM

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... Well as long as she's the dinner guest and not the dinner... XD


23rd Apr 2017, 3:26 PM

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*lol* that look... =P

...and Kiiittteeeeeyyy <3 so adorable...

I hope Dust will not get depressed that the only one wanting to be with him is Kitty - the one he only wants to shoo away... =P


24th Apr 2017, 8:19 AM

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Eh, he'll get over it, probably XDDD


23rd Apr 2017, 4:32 PM

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Aw man I could really use some Kitty-love like that D:. SO CUTE <3. If animals love Dusty so much it has to mean he has a truly good heart <3

Okaay that guys' smile. Reminds me of what mom says about "never trusting smiling dogs" X"D. I'll put money on it that Dusty is gonna follow them!


24th Apr 2017, 8:34 AM

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He does have a good heart, I can admit that much <3 He's just very sad and angry and abused oftentimes.

I don't think I've heard that saying before. I think I know what might be a similar one regarding crocodiles, though?


23rd Apr 2017, 5:32 PM

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I would have to wonder if maybe the kitty is trying to get Dust to feel like he should follow Mina after he was stopped long enough to see her go by with the new escort.


24th Apr 2017, 8:53 AM

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Cats are mysterious ebil creatures ;3


23rd Apr 2017, 5:44 PM

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Awww, I hope that kitty sticks around for the whole adventure! :D

And see, Dust? Look just how replaceable you are >.> Try not to feel bad! T__T


24th Apr 2017, 8:54 AM

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I laughed for a good solid minute after reading this, Proxy XDDD


23rd Apr 2017, 8:42 PM

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That home wrecker... Bring back that Princess, Bones Jackson! :'D


24th Apr 2017, 8:55 AM

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They're not even together yet, we're going straight to homewrecker??? XDDD


24th Apr 2017, 10:21 AM

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... I dont trust him. and Mina.. seriously! Dust go rescue the princess.. again.


24th Apr 2017, 11:31 PM

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i was worried that she could be going with some crazy murderer at first, and then i remembered who she was. Not sure who I'm worried more for at this point now.

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