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Chapter 7 - page 5

posted 11th Nov 2018, 9:12 AM

Chapter 7 - page 5
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CiciEnixa

11th Nov 2018, 9:12 AM

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I had to keep telling myself "no Cici, this is fine, this is normal" while doing this page, because my brain kept going WHY ARE WE DRAWING PURGATORY THIS IS PURGATORY THEY ALL DEYD (This is NOT purgatory, I promise XD Sometimes my brain acts like I didn't write this stuff, like I have two separate brains for this)

(To peeps who saw the unshaded version, thank you for your patience! This November and December are gonna be busy months for me, so future updates may also be a bit spotty, but I will do my best)

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Centcomm

11th Nov 2018, 9:31 AM

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this will end in tears for all involved...

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:18 AM

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Could be tears of laughter? XD (for me, anyway , lol)

gamer6574

11th Nov 2018, 12:30 PM

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Well it looks like they all got better. That or he had a really bad case of Mina vision last night and hallucinated everything. Personally hoping for an extended dream sequence because it feels cheap just to have it all being just a dream and nothing happened. Like right now it is Danni trying to give Dust a happy place long enough for him to explain his situation or at least probe for info about Cetus while Big bird keeps Cetus busy in the physical realm.

dawndemonica

11th Nov 2018, 12:37 PM

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nope. it's another dream. Gus is very dead, as is the sister (forgot her name), they both took a bullet through the brain.

gamer6574

11th Nov 2018, 12:47 PM

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I hope so, because if none of that happened then this was the second longest dream sequence I have seen in fictional media the first being that one season of Dallas. Of course if it was all a dream then I would just love seeing Danni go "this was all a dream".(with several inception bwams going off right after)

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:25 AM

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@Gamer6574 XDDD I do agree that essentially having all of Chapter 6 to be "just a dream" would feel kinda cheap, but let's see how things are by next page.

With Danni, who knows what dream shenanigans are afoot.

DLKmusic

12th Nov 2018, 12:24 AM

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Gus is dead, Clyde is dead, Jessie is dead, only lil' Billy is alive, and he's missing an arm.

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:31 AM

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@Don Yep XD Though we actually aren't all that sure about Billy, either, considering he could have bled out due to lack of an arm.

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:21 AM

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@Dawn The sister is Jesse, and Clyde also took a shotgun barrel through his skull, but yes, all those deaths did happen.

Though, whether those deaths happened in a dream or it was all irl is... :)

Japster

11th Nov 2018, 2:12 PM

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...
This doesn't feel right.

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:34 AM

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You're telling me, Jap... you're telling me XDDD

TheD-Wrek

11th Nov 2018, 9:41 PM

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I could just hear his scream as I read this. Poor Dust-o. :'D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z0cqNmK3AL8

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:35 AM

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The most potent of screams, only reserved for Dust's horror and disbelief XDDD

Microraptor

11th Nov 2018, 10:59 PM

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Don't startle the bandits please, Dust...

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:37 AM

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XD This made me think of those signs at the zoo and aquariums saying "Don't tap on the glass, you'll scare the animals" or "Don't use flash photography, they're very sensitive to light" and I have yet to stop laughing hahahaha

Microraptor

12th Nov 2018, 9:35 AM

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Yes, that's exactly what I was alluding to! :-D

MST3KFan

12th Nov 2018, 12:20 AM

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I'm guessing this is Danni's second attempt at a 'peaceful' illusion for Dust.
The problem being is he saw most of these people die and/or kill the others.

Nice to Jesse back and alive and well though even if just an illusion.

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:40 AM

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Yeahhh seeing dead people beling alive and well as i you had a bout of insanity before really does not bode well for Dust's mental state XD If this IS Danni's second attempt, they are REALLY messing it up big time.

DLKmusic

12th Nov 2018, 12:30 AM

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Danni, you're looking for a happy place for Dust, and you choose this?

wow...

Although it kinda sucks for Dust that his life has been so bad up to this point that this crew would be considered a happy place...

"Weast" huh? That's funny!

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 8:55 AM

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Assuming it IS Danni, Danni's... probably working with what little resource they have... XD It's clearly not going well, I know XDDD

"Weast" is a Spongebob ref, when they were arguing about directions. I think it went like "oh East? I thought you said Weast!"

Proxy170

12th Nov 2018, 1:17 AM

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Cici...this better be some dream within a dream inception thing...

'CAUSE WHAT IS GUS DOIN' ALIVE??

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 9:00 AM

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*looks at script* XD I can't even start TRYING to explain my own shenanigans without spoiling stuff. Next page might start explaining things, tho XDDD

Also maybe Gus survived amputation, being gutted, and a bullet through the head? :,D XD

Jarvi

12th Nov 2018, 6:16 AM

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Firstly - Hmmm, an alternative universe or something? After all Clio did say she'll tell the story again and that Dust should try not to die this time.. it's all confusing but cool :D

Secondly - I'm happy to see the team being all cheerful and fine in this timeline or whatever :) (I'm totally fine with Gus being okay in here if it's alternative thing and he isn't a huge cucumber in here (he doesn't seem to be :))! Hopefully, they have a better job this time too xD Especially happy about seeing the siblings well ^^ Jesse is being a goofball and Billy is cute as always and now has blue cloth thingy <3 <3

Thirdly - "Show a barrel down your throat" hahah good one Gus, good one :D

And lastly - Um... not that I am complaining but guys, why are you playing strip poker? XDD

CiciEnixa

12th Nov 2018, 9:14 AM

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1st - could be, could be... it'd definitely make sense :P

2nd - It's SO weird but also kinda nice XD My sis also said something similar, she said it was nice to see them all not evil and nasty. (of course, the blue poncho thing hahaha that was also sis's design)

3rd - it's so hard to not immediately default to f*** XD (also maybe a reference to... Clyde's fate of having a (shotgun) barrel shoved through him >_>)

Last - Either Clyde decided this would raise the stakes since there is a sleeping girl in the same wagon as them... or this is what their dumb selves do every day anyway and they just don't care XD I'll let you decide XP

Jarvi

13th Nov 2018, 7:40 AM

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3rd - Oh I totally meant the shotgun barrel reference here, actually for once I didn't even think of the d* joke xD

Last - Sleeping girl? But Dust is not a g.... wait... is Mina sleeping in this weird position there? xD

CiciEnixa

13th Nov 2018, 8:17 AM

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I didn't even think of it as a d*** joke either, I just wanted to make sure it was clear he wasn't talking about those wooden oak barrels you hold beer or wine in. Now I'll never think of this as anything other than a d*** joke XDDD

Mina is... sleeping, as far as everyone else knows. She's actually just leaning back and pretending to take a nap.

Ruxin

15th Nov 2018, 8:13 AM

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I finally caught up. This comic is really good, you've dropped a lot of questions and a lot of hooks along the way (especially this page) and I'm pretty much in for the long haul with this. Your art is great, and I've always thought this, but you've definitely grown over these six chapters, and I absolutely love how expressive your characters have become.

The success you've had is certainly well earned. You're a great storyteller and artist and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this series next.

CiciEnixa

16th Nov 2018, 8:11 AM

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Well dangit, now I'm embarrassed XD Thank you Ruxin~ I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'm gonna do my best to keep at it! X3

BlueDragon

16th Nov 2018, 4:02 AM

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In spite of all this cheeriness, I have a feeling things won't end well.

Nice to see Billy again, though (I liked him :D)

edit: I said "her" instead of "him" oops!

CiciEnixa

16th Nov 2018, 8:22 AM

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I did notice that, actually. Any peaceful or cheery or funny moment, and you guys start suspecting horrible things are about to happen...

... I mean you guys are always absolutely right every time considering this is FD2R but still XDDD

I'm glad you like Billy, he's a sweet boi that must be protected in this cruel comic. Mainly from me XD

mjkj

16th Nov 2018, 6:29 AM

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seems like the nightmare is not over yet... =P

CiciEnixa

16th Nov 2018, 8:33 AM

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Not quite, no XD Though in what form this time...

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